After recieving feedback from my peers and media teacher clearly describing the need for clearer text on the page, I decided to alter the text by firstly reducing the amount and secondly it was suggested I should highlight block the text. I did this by using character styles in Adobe Indesign and then selecting underline, offset at -4 and then selecting the colour as black. The weight was set at 17. This is how I managed to alter my pages after receiving feedback. I have left my previous finished double page spreads due to my opinion of them being aesthetically superior and to show the progression and comparison of my work after an alteration from readers.
